The Alchemist by Paulo Coelho
Fiction
I
really tried to like this book and I had heard a lot of good things about it.
In an interview with the New York Times even Malala Yousafzai had said that it
was her favorite book. As in Malala Yousafzai, winner of the Nobel Prize.
Despite all this, frankly I was sort of disappointed.
The Alchemist is about a boy named Santiago who leaves his
life as a shepherd to try to look for treasure at the urging of a king. Through
his journey, Santiago learns the importance of following one’s “Personal
Legend.” Coelho talks about one’s “Personal Legend” a lot in the book which he
describes as what one’s soul was meant to do. While traveling, Santiago finds a
beautiful woman named Fatima. Santiago is tempted to stay with Fatima and stop
looking for his treasure, but he eventually decides that he will go and come
back for her, because not even love should stop him. Fatima contradicts
Coelho’s belief in everyone having a “Personal Legend.” Fatima doesn’t seem to
have a “Personal Legend” because the only thing she does during The Alchemist
is wait for Santiago to fulfill his “Personal Legend” or she urges him to
fulfill his “Personal Legend.” Fatima’s only purpose in the book is to serve
Santiago so either that means that 1.)
her Personal Legend is to serve Santiago or 2.) she hasn’t realized her Personal Legend yet. Both of these
interpretations are problematic and the “woman as muse” or “woman as
stay-at-home help meet” are familiar - and terribly annoying -- stereotypes.
If
it is scenario 1.) her Personal Legend is
to serve Santiago, Coelho contributes to a sexist belief that women were
made to serve the men in their lives. This idea takes away Fatima’s autonomy as
a person and her ability to make decisions for herself. Given that Fatima is
one of the very few women in the novel (the other two being “Baker’s Daughter”
and “Tricky Gypsy”), this means that Coelho is implicitly saying that women
should be given a sort of second class status without their own personal
struggles. But let’s say for the sake of argument that Coelho didn’t mean for
Fatima’s “Personal Legend” to be to serve Santiago or for Fatima to be an
individual at all. Maybe he meant for
them to be a metaphor for love or devotion so that Fatima-Santiago are actually
mirror images of each other and one could just have easily been the other (i.e.
Fatima could be the one on the quest and Santiago would be waiting at home for
her to return). That seem far-fetched
and it also seems like a less than ideal version of a love story.
If
it is scenario 2.) she hasn’t realized
her “Personal Legend” yet, Santiago is really exploiting their
relationship. Santiago knows how important it is for one to discover his “Personal Legend”, but he doesn’t
urge Fatima to find hers like she urges him. Santiago doesn’t support Fatima in
the ways that she supported him. On the
contrary, he keeps her dependent on him, waiting for him to return so that she
is essentially trapped and even less likely to find her “Personal Legend.”
I
realize the book is supposed to be an inspiring fable but the tired old gender
stereotypes kept me from appreciating it the way apparently millions of others
did. Go figure.